The Fenimeldiyaan: Vacation - Chapter 3
River was astonished at Rita’s generosity. She had yet to
figure out the Fenian currency fully, but even she could tell that some of the
things her new friend had bought for her weren’t cheap. The shoes felt
surprisingly good on her feet that were used to being bare, making it so the
cuts and bruises from going around without protection ached less.
Rita brought her to a place full of women having people
touch their hair and cut it. She stood back a little nervously, knowing the
pain of having someone tug at her curls but being unable to brush them. Rita
grabbed her hand, laughing, and pulled her in after her.
About an hour later, the woman fixing River’s hair had
finished and showed the result to her in the mirror. Her curly brown hair
seemed bouncier and more alive than it had before, with about four inches of
dead hair cut off. It had also been washed thoroughly and the snarls all combed
out without hurting her. River stared at her reflection in the mirror, unable
to fully convince herself that it was really her. Although her brown eyes were
still too big for her face and she was still far too skinny, she at least looked
… normal. Not like a street rat.
She turned to Rita with a wide smile, writing, “I love it! Thank you so much!” The
feeling of their stalker did little to dampen her enthusiasm.
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Andreas took a roll of banknotes from the pocket of his
jacket and handed them over to the young mother. The look of gratitude on the woman’s face
spoke volumes. “Thank ye, Lord
Guardian. Now I can pay next month’s
rent and have enough for food as well”.
Andreas nodded and patted the child’s head before answering Morgan.
“Tis the Guardian’s residence”. Andreas’s proud tone made it seem as if he
were speaking about a grand Carpathian mansion rather than a little tin shack
in a deprived Par-Varah district. “Me Ma
lived here with Kyrtaz and Luigi. When I
were little, Luigi would put me on the roof and I’d jump off. Ma and me three fathers would take turns
catching me. I used to spend hours doing
that. Like I said, this place be full of
precious memories”.
He then produced some more bowls of food, apparently from
nowhere and proceeded to help Elsa and the priest feed the children.
“If you’re trying to impress me, don’t bother!” Elsa
growled. “You’ve got a lot to answer
for, bringing me here!”
“Ye can’t blame me for what happened to ye in the past”. Andreas sounded hurt but relatively
calm. “Besides, twas never me plan to
bring ye here. Twas me intention to
allow ye time to rest, while keeping Gerald and Morgan occupied. And don’t be angry at Ezun or Anni. Ye could have stayed at the diner”.
He was right, but Elsa would never admit that, not even to
herself. She cursed under her breath and
continued feeding the child, wondering what it would be like to have one of her
own. No doubt Gerald would turn out to
be an incompetent father, so it was never too soon to get some hands-on
childcare experience.
Andreas finished feeding the last of the five children and
wiped the remains of food off the little girl’s face with his
handkerchief. He picked her up in his
arms and held her while he spoke to his companions. “So where would ye like to go next? I can borrow one of Alonzo’s vehicles and
take ye for a drive around the city, or we could go over to the Nentofore
Estate and visit me adopted family.
Unless ye’d prefer to go to the desert?”
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“Tis me pleasure” Rita replied. “And thank ye for coming with me. I usually end up coming here alone. The Virian and Malvanian students don’t feel
comfortable around me, but ye’ve accepted me and that means a lot”.
“The other students
avoid me too” River wrote.
Rita nodded. “Like
Andreas says, they fear what they don’t understand. Tis a result of centuries of ingrained
prejudice. Northern Virians be the worst
for mistrust. They don’t even like folks
from Southern Viria, let alone off-worlders.
Malvanians ain’t quite as bad, but they be isolationist and anti-social,
especially the older generations”. She
rolled her eyes and gave a resigned sigh.
“Anyways, enough about cultural divides.
Let’s get something to eat. Ye
won’t find pizza here but I know a place that does decent buffalo burgers and
fried poultry. Twill make a change from
all those boring stews at the Don”.
River had not realised that she was hungry until she smelled
the enticing aromas from the diner. Such
places did not exist in Corttann and she was fascinated by the menus displayed
in the window. Taverns and inns back
home never showed pictures of the dishes on offer.
However, a familiar mind signature lurking nearby caused her
to turn away from the colourful images of food.
She tugged on Rita’s arm and held up her book. “I know
who’s been following us. It’s Caratacuus”.
Rita let go of the door, her pretty face contorted in a
grimace. “Trust him to come and spoil
our fun!”
At that moment, the tall mathematics teacher cancelled his
invisibility spell and gave a formal double bow to the two girls. “I was concerned about you, especially
River. Tis her first time out in the
city and I wanted to make sure that no harm came to her. Besides, if you want a change from
traditional Malvanian food, might I make a recommendation?”
Both girls stared open-mouthed at him.
“Ye ain’t gonna drag us back to the Don and bring us afore
the Elders for being disobedient?” Rita asked.
Caratacuus gave the merest hint of a smile and shook his
head. “No. Your intentions weren’t bad ones. I only wish that you had followed procedure
and sought permission. Now, my son in
law happens to own a restaurant down in Memraan. Would you like to have dinner there?”
“Memraan be way down south!” Rita gasped.
“Unless someone moved it since I last went there” Caratacuus
stated. “So we can make do with this
fast-food place or we can dine in style at Orixas. Either way, I shall be accompanying you. What would you prefer?”
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Watching Elsa’s facial expressions, Gerald saw her grimace
at the mention of driving — again. Perhaps the smells of Grehelin Street hadn’t
bothered her, but cars didn’t seem to sit well with the thief. And Morgan
looked unhappy at the mention of the desert. With his added bulk, the
sweltering heat would be difficult to bear. Gerald answered for them. “Mayhap
we can meet yer adopted family?” he suggested.
Morgan nodded enthusiastically — anything but the desert at
the moment was fine with him. The thought of going there made him sweat just
thinking about it, though he did want to meet Andreas’s wife. Perhaps later, he
decided. After they visited the Nentofores — whoever they were. Maybe they
would be good cooks. “I’m with Gerald,” he said. “I want to meet more of your
family.”
Elsa avoided Andreas’s gaze and shrugged. “Whichever,” she
said. The child in Andreas’s arms snatched ahold of her braid and started
tugging on it, bringing a reluctant smile to Elsa’s face. “Oh, come now,” she
said, laughing as she tried to extricate her hair from the girl’s grasp. “My
hair may be long, but it’s not a toy!”
Morgan started chuckling. “It must be too pretty for her to
resist,” he commented.
Elsa rolled her eyes at him before finally freeing her hair.
“There,” she said. The child pouted, and Morgan conjured a red piece of cloth
for the girl. It seemed to satisfy her as she sat toying with it in Andreas’s
grasp. She glanced up once to tug on his moustache briefly before carrying on
with the cloth. Elsa noted the gentle care Andreas had with the child and tried
very hard not to smile.
Gerald watched them for a few moments, noticing his wife’s
happiness with a hint of confusion. She’d never been particularly fond of
children before. So what had changed …? “Whenever ye be ready,” he told
Andreas.
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River smiled at Caratacuus a little shyly. The man was much
taller than she was, the result making him into an intimidating figure for the
girl. She didn’t mind him coming with them, though Rita looked a little
annoyed.
He gave River the tiniest hint of a smile. “Well?” he said.
“Which would you prefer?”
River glanced at Rita, who blew her hair out of her eyes and
mostly ignored River. Shrugging to herself, River opened her book and scribbled
in it before turning it to Caratacuus. “I’d
like to try your son-in-law’s food, if that would be alright. I’ve never dined
in style before.” To be honest, she really didn’t know what “style” really
was. Then a concern sprouted in her mind. “If
that’s alright with you, Rita?” She didn’t want to offend her new friend,
after all.
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Andreas handed the child over to the priest. “Alright, off to the Nentofore estate
then. Tis located on the outskirts of
the city of Megasi, down in the Southern Region. The estate be like a city in itself. The Nentofore family be one of the largest in
the entire Carpathian Way, although not all of them live on the estate. As well as the family residences, there be a
swimming pool, practice grounds for martial arts, beautiful gardens, the hedge
maze and the orchard”.
It was exactly as Andreas had described. A tall hedge bounded the estate but the
entrance gates were left wide open. He
had chosen to materialise them just inside the entrance, so that they could see
the entire layout of the estate.
It was a refreshing antidote after the bustle of the city
street and the sight of all the poor citizens milling around. At first glance, the place seemed deserted,
but as the visitors strolled around, they saw teams of gardeners at work, and
groups of children playing.
One of the gardeners looked up as they walked past. It was an elderly woman with unruly curly
hair. “Andreas!” she enthused, flinging
down her shovel, wiping her dirty hands on her overalls and giving him a
squashy hug. “Tis wonderful to see
ye. And ye’ve brought friends!”
By this time, Gerald and Morgan were accustomed to seeing
Andreas being friendly with anyone and everyone, regardless of social status. Evidently this included the gardeners. Elsa could not help feeling curious,
wondering if the devious little man had lied about his connection to the
esteemed and wealthy Nentofore family.
“Elsa, Gerald, Morgan, I’d like to introduce ye to Lady
Galea Nentofore, the Matriarch” Andreas announced proudly. “Like meself, she don’t pay much mind to
fancy titles, so ye may call her Galea or Gal”.
She hugged each of them in turn, smiling and chucking. “I don’t need powers of sorcery to deduce what
ye all be thinking — that I
don’t fit yer idea of what a Carpathian Matriarch ought to look like. Tis why me family has remained in the Third
Echelon, despite having the power and the wealth to challenge for a place in
the Inner Circle. We prefer to enjoy our
freedom, rather than be bound by the restrictions that a more exalted status
would place upon us”.
“Er … lovely to meet ye too”. Gerald was flustered and more than a little
embarrassed by the attentions of the elderly Matriarch. “Nice place ye’ve got here”.
“Those apples and peaches look tasty” Morgan remarked,
glancing over to the nearby orchard, where the trees hung heavy with ripe
fruit.
“Help yerself” Galea invited. “Any friends of Andreas be welcome here. I’ve just got to finish weeding this bed,
then I’ll be taking a break and we can go up to me parlour for tea and cakes”.
Morgan’s eyes lit up at the mention of cakes, despite the
fact that he was already slurping on a peach.
“Surely ye can’t be hungry after that massive lunch we had
at Ezun’s?” Gerald enquired.
Morgan wiped peach juice from his chin. “After all that walking around, I’ve worked
up an appetite again”.
Andreas led them over to the hedge maze, mindful to keep a
slow pace for the sake of Morgan. “This
be Gal’s masterpiece. The children love
it and even we adults play in there at times.
Gal be sneaky though. Sometimes
she’ll change the layout and someone will get trapped in there. Tis no problem for those of us with enhanced
senses and sorcery skills though”.
Three children emerged from the maze, laughing. As soon as they saw Andreas, they rushed up
to him, speaking excitedly in Carpathian.
He hugged them, clearly enjoying himself. Soon he was engaged in a rapid-fire
conversation with them.
After a few minutes, he broke off and returned his attention
to the three Vordellans. “They wanted to
know if I’ll come swimming, climb trees and teach them tricks. I’ve told them mayhap later, that I have to
look after ye first”.
Again, Elsa found herself smiling at the children. Although they were obviously privileged and
well-looked after, they showed the same admiration and love for Andreas as the
malnourished street children had.
“Ye be alright, me love?” Gerald enquired, having noticed
the dreamy look on her face. “Ye ain’t
come over all travel-sick again, have ye?”
“I’m fine” she answered, a little abruptly. “No thanks to you though. Anyway, let’s put that behind us and enjoy
the rest of our vacation. I think I’m
going to like this place”.
They continued walking around the gardens, looking at the
colourful flowerbeds and the other ornamental features such as fountains,
gazebos and Galea’s artistic topiary creations.
The children tagged along, laughing and chattering amongst themselves.
At one point they stopped for a rest and Andreas performed
some conjuring tricks to entertain the children. He took pieces of string from his pocket and
tied them in knots around his fingers.
Then he wrapped his hand in a handkerchief and waved it around a
bit. When he unwrapped it, the pieces of
string were gone. Another trick involved
the children trying to guess which hand a piece of candy was in. They kept getting it wrong, and eventually,
he pretended to find the candy in unexpected places — one piece behind a child’s ear, another piece in a child’s
pocket and the last piece in the hood of Morgan’s cape. He distributed the candy to the children and
even gave Morgan a piece.
“I be done now” Galea announced, striding up to them. “Mando will have tea and cakes for us”.
She led them to the oldest and largest residence on the
estate. It was like a small castle and
it even had a tower at one end, although the tower was like nothing the
Vordellans had ever seen before. Its
domed top appeared to be completely made from glass. They stared up at it in wonder for a few
minutes before following Andreas and Galea inside.
Galea’s parlour turned out to be slightly shabby but very
cosy and welcoming. The brocaded sofas
showed signs of wear and the antique furniture bore a few chips and scratches,
indicating that the wealthy Matriarch did not place a high value on material
possessions.
Morgan was glad to sit down.
Gerald stood for a while, staring out of the window, lost in
thought.
A little while later, a short, elderly man with frizzy grey
collar-length hair entered the room, bearing a tray laden with the promised tea
and cakes. Galea introduced him as her
husband, Lord Armando Ciresi. “He does
most of the cooking around here. I be
totally useless in the kitchen. Mando
tells me to stay away, in case I start a fire”.
She chuckled at her own self-deprecating humour. “Anyways, I’ll go and find Al and Lu. They arrived a few days ago, come for a
change of scene from the streets of Vaskrath”.
Morgan laughed. “I
prefer eating to cooking” he remarked, reaching for a cake.
“There’s a surprise” Elsa said with a sigh.
Galea bustled off, returning with two other little men, whom
she introduced as her brothers, Luigi and Alonzo. Luigi’s skinny body was swathed in bandages
instead of proper clothes and he had another bandage tied around his bald
head. Alonzo had waist-length hair and
beard but he dressed in a similar way to Andreas, in an old tweed suit and
leather sandals.
Soon all of them were chatting merrily, catching up on each
others’ news. Their conversation was
chaotic; they talked over each other and burst into laughter at random
intervals. Gerald and Morgan joined in,
but Elsa contributed little, feeling awkward amongst such lively company.
At one point, Luigi noticed her lack of participation. “Dear Elsa not happy? What be wrong?”
“Nothing” she answered, trying to force a smile. “Just a little tired, that’s all”.
“Show ye good place to rest” Luigi suggested, pointing to
the ceiling with a grimy finger. “Special
room”. He stood up, gave an impish grin
and gestured to her. “Follow, follow!”
Relieved to have an excuse for leaving the parlour, she
followed the peculiar little man out into the wood-panelled corridor. He led her along to a spiral staircase and
pointed upwards again, a look of sheer delight on his dirt-smeared face.
At the top of the staircase was a plain wooden door. Luigi pushed it open and danced inside,
jumping up and down on the balls of his feet.
Elsa stared around, realising that she was inside the
glass-domed tower which they had looked at from the outside. The view was stunning, looking out over the
estate.
“Observatory” Luigi explained. “See stars at night. Beautiful.
Dear Elsa have this room now. I
find somewhere else to sleep”.
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Rita shrugged. “Don’t
seem like I’ve got much of a choice”.
“Tis a meal, not a punishment” Caratacuus reminded her. “Banh refuses to serve traditional Malvanian
food in his restaurant. He prefers
Sartorian and Carpathian dishes. I
expect you’ll be able to have pizza there”.
At the mention of pizza, Rita summoned up a weak smile. “Alright, let’s go”.
Caratacuus gave one of his strange half-smiles and held
hands with the girls.
The restaurant was tastefully decorated in a manner very
different from the typical minimalist style prevalent throughout most of
Malvania. Modern art prints adorned the
walls and the whole atmosphere of the place was warm and inviting. Banh Lemuel turned out to be a plump cheerful
man, while his wife Ryaah closely resembled Caratacuus. It was easy to see that she was his daughter,
with her long white hair, delicate facial features and slightly pointed chin.
Banh explained the contents of the various dishes for
River’s benefit, leaning over and pointing enthusiastically at the menu. Again, there were colourful pictures of the
food.
Predictably, Rita chose pizza with spicy sausage
topping. After much consultation with
Banh, River settled on a mild, creamy dish with poultry and pasta.
“I shall have the ramistaahl” Caratacuus declared without
looking at the menu.
Rita screwed up her face in an expression of disgust.
River held up her book.
“What’s wrong with that?”
“Ramistaahl be a Sartorian dish” Rita explained. “Raw minced baby lizards with fire
spices”. She laughed. “Who’d have thought Uncle Cara would choose
something like that?”
Banh guffawed and Ryaah giggled. “Tis one of Father’s favourites” she stated.
The meal was served with fine Carpathian wine. As expected, Caratacuus drank sparingly. Banh and Ryaah joined them at the table,
although Banh disappeared into the kitchen at intervals.
As soon as the plates were cleared away, Rita whispered to
River “I’ve had enough of making polite conversation with our teacher and his
family. I know ye be enjoying yerself,
but I don’t feel comfortable here. Would
ye mind if we make an excuse and get Uncle Cara to take us back to the Don
now?”
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Elsa turned to Luigi, though the view out the window still
pulled at her. Guilt also tugged at her. “But … if this is your room …” Nothing
would ever convince her to give this place to a complete stranger. It was
beautiful and enchanting.
Luigi smiled widely. “It be yers, dear Elsa!” he told her,
bouncing up and down on his heels.
For some reason, tears sprang to Elsa’s eyes. Not many
people would have done such a selfless gesture to her. She sank down against
the wall, looking at Luigi and trying not to cry. “Th-thank you,” she managed
in a whisper. Exhaustion threatened to overcome her. She’d never been very good
at small talk, like Gerald and Morgan were doing downstairs. She had also not
been particularly friendly to the Nentofores, yet here was Luigi, giving her
what had to be the best room on the entire estate. “I’m honoured.”
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Downstairs, Morgan was devouring yet another cake, his mouth
too full to do much else but laugh. Even Gerald was enjoying himself, chuckling
at Andreas’s conversations with these people. They were all obviously very
close.
There was a lull in the conversation at one point, and
Gerald found himself alone with Andreas as the Nentofores prepared to serve
dinner. It seemed to him that they’d just eaten lunch, but time had passed with
alarming speed. Morgan had cheerily offered to help them, stating that since he
would probably eat the most, he would help.
The solitude gave Gerald time to discuss something with
Andreas that he’d been stewing about for a while, yet he felt vaguely
uncomfortable in starting the conversation. He passed his hand over his hair
casually. “I didn’t want to discuss this in front of Elsa,” he admitted, “but I
been having these weird dreams lately. Ever since ye invited the lot of us
here, to be honest. Long story short, it weren’t very good dreams. One of them,
I dunno, she didn’t love me no more. We got involved in this horrible mess …”
He chewed his lip. “Andreas, all of them are about Elsa. Normally I wouldn’t be
afraid if it twas anyone else, but Elsa … she and I share this peculiar empathy
link thing Apollo told us about. It be a long story how we got it, but in
short, we feel what the other feels if it be strong. I don’t want nothing
happening to her, Andreas, but I know she’ll be angry with me if she learns I
were keeping this from her. I’ve been trying not to push her too far after all
the trouble with … ye know … Cliff.”
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Disappointment shot through River, but she forced it down.
If Rita wasn’t enjoying herself, then she wouldn’t torture her any longer by
staying. After finishing her meal, she hugged Caratacuus’s family and wrote
down her thanks for the delicious meal. She didn’t disclose that they were
leaving — yet — since she figured that Rita would want to tell them. Make an
excuse, as she’d put it.
The meal really had been delicious. Although River wanted to
stay longer — she was seeing a whole new side to Caratacuus that she was
enjoying — she still liked Rita and wanted to humour her new friend. She sat
back down beside Rita, tucking her book back under her arm.
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Luigi produced a clean handkerchief from somewhere inside
his bandaged chest and proceeded to wipe away Elsa’s tears. “No cry, dear Elsa, no cry. Or ye’ll make me cry too”. He paused to wipe away a tear from his own
eye, his finger smearing more dirt onto his little round face. “I be empath, ye see. I pick up emotions from others”.
Elsa choked back more tears, not wanting to upset the eccentric
little man who was being so kind to her.
Luigi smiled at her and enfolded her in his bandaged arms, murmuring
what sounded like some sort of lullaby.
A moment later, he picked her up and carried her over to the
bed, laying her down gently and arranging the pillows and blankets around
her. “Rest now, dear Elsa. Have sparkly dreams. Dinner soon but if ye ain’t hungry, save ye
some for later”.
The bed felt soft yet firm, just right, and far more
comfortable than the back seat of Andreas’s old truck. She sank back into the pillows, sleep
claiming her even before Luigi had tiptoed silently out of the room.
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Andreas stroked his moustache and fiddled with his hair
while he listened to Gerald’s account of the strange dreams. “Ye know some of me troubled family history,
Gerald. From an early age, I learned to
get by without relying on others. For a
long time, I worked alone and I thought I were better off alone. Twas a terrible time when I had to cut off
ties with the Nentofores and go back to serving me blood family as their Spy
Master. On one particular mission, I met
some people who changed me way of life forever.
Ye know who they be —
Anni and her family. From that time
onwards, I were never totally alone.
Even when I were on a solo mission, I knew that I could call in back-up
at any time”.
“Aye, I get it, sort of” Gerald cut in. “Ye be saying that I should tell Elsa what be
worrying me. That brings on another
worry — she’ll think I be weak
and she’ll laugh at me. She won’t ever
take me seriously again if I tell her that I be afraid of nightmares”.
“Twill be worse for both of ye if ye try to deal with yer
problems alone” Andreas remarked. “She
were angry and upset when ye told her about what had happened betwixt ye and
Cliff, but she stuck by ye. Besides, I
think ye misjudge her. There be
something else going on with her, from what Anni told me. Nothing definite, just a vague impression
that she has worries of her own. Could
be to do with her sister. Ye know how
close they be, but since Elaine be kept busy, they ain’t been spending so much
time together. Tell Elsa what be on yer
mind and mayhap she’ll open up to ye. If
laughing at ye be the worst she does, laugh along with her. Sometimes ye have to appear weak in order to
be truly strong. Like when I used to
allow me half-brothers to give me beatings.
They thought me weak, but I endured and proved meself to be far stronger
than them. Give it a try, eh? Talk to her”.
Gerald gave a helpless shrug. “Alright”.
Then he looked around the room, noticing that Elsa had not
returned. “Where did she go?”
Andreas grinned. “To
one of me other favourite places. She
might be asleep by now, but if she ain’t, I’ll leave the two of ye alone to
talk”.
The sun had almost set by that time and twilight was fast
approaching. When Andreas led Gerald up
the spiral staircase and into the observatory, even the cynical mercenary could
not fail to be moved by the wonderful view.
However, as soon as he saw the sleeping figure in the bed,
he forgot all about the view. He sat on
the edge of the bed, leaned over and planted a gentle kiss on Elsa’s
forehead. “Sweet dreams, me love”.
Andreas had already left the room.
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Rita pulled a comedic face at River and finished her glass
of wine. She then tapped Caratacuus on
the arm to get his attention and launched into a tale of how she was having a
great time but had remembered that Remyn was expecting her essay in tomorrow. “Tis a shame and all, but I really ought to
get on with it. Healing ain’t exactly me
strongest subject”.
Caratacuus inclined his head. “Very well, my dear. I’ll just say my farewells to my family and
then we can go back. If you don’t manage
to finish the essay, let me know and I’ll speak to Remyn on your behalf. I feel sure he’d relax the deadline. We work our students very hard, so tis only
fair that we should allow them some fun as well”.
Ryaah approached River, holding out a bulky bag. “I understand from my father that you enjoy
reading. He may not have mentioned it,
but I have two careers. As well as being
a healer, I also write novels for young adults.
I’ve put together a selection for you.
Since you haven’t gotten used to technology yet, these are the printed
versions instead of data crystals. My
own children enjoy them, especially the comedies. It started out as a hobby but when I found
that people liked my writing, I went in for it more seriously. Anyway, I hope you like them and I look
forward to seeing you and Rita here again sometime”.
River opened her book and wrote out yet more thanks. Ryaah smiled and hugged her.
“Thank the Goddess that be over!” Rita exclaimed, as soon as
Caratacuus had translocated them back to the Donovan Institute and gone off to
his quarters. “I just hope Uncle Cara
don’t mention the essay to Uncle Rem, for it ain’t due until the fifth day”.
River had no idea how to answer that, so she opted for what
she hoped was a safe reply. “I don’t believe Caratacuus is as strict as
we thought. We saw another side of him
tonight. It’s been one of the best days
of my life, definitely the best day since I started studying here”. She leaned over and hugged Rita.
The two girls conversed a little longer before seeking their
quarters and settling down for the night.
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